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Yu ([personal profile] alonelihood) wrote in [personal profile] grimseers 2020-08-22 02:54 pm (UTC)

This is so good.... I love the understanding here, and the desire to understand each other in places where they don't yet. That's real love...

The descriptions here are so beautiful!!!! There are so many little phrases that are quotable and echo in my head.

She is afraid like you were afraid.

This gave me a double take because I didn't realize it said "were" at first!

Not to this, or to kindness.

Ugh, this is so good.

This whole thing is so beautiful though... so descriptive and emotive. I LOVE all of your depictions of grimdarkness and the way Kanaya is diametrically opposite of it. Kanaya and Rose are both written so well here.

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